Comments and Comments Received

Yesterday, Bud, one of the people on my dissertation committee, emailed me comments on the chapter I sent him. He was pleased overall and had just five brief comments. I started working on addressing them last night and knocked off three of them. With one of the concerns I knew I needed to add something. I was thinking I would write two or three sentences. Well, by the time I stopped writing -- and I wasn't done yet -- I had two or three pages. I won't use all of that, but I might take some of it and move it to another chapter.